Comments on: I Am From http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/ Wed, 10 Sep 2008 11:33:40 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: a mom http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-121 a mom Wed, 10 Sep 2008 11:33:40 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-121 Betsy, I know this is from last year, but I am just now reading the poems. You did an outstanding job on your poem and I really enjoyed it. I hope you still feel proud of it. Betsy, I know this is from last year, but I am just now reading the poems. You did an outstanding job on your poem and I really enjoyed it. I hope you still feel proud of it.

]]> By: Marcos http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-82 Marcos Thu, 01 May 2008 18:04:48 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-82 Good job Betsy, I liked the way how each line rhymed. It also changed my life. Good job Betsy, I liked the way how each line rhymed. It also changed my life.

]]> By: Peter http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-50 Peter Thu, 01 May 2008 14:39:02 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-50 Betsy your poem changed my life. good job Betsy your poem changed my life. good job

]]> By: Virginia I. http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-47 Virginia I. Thu, 01 May 2008 14:31:00 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-47 Betsy, I really enjoyed reading your poem, I could really relate. My favorite part of your poem was your first stanza- piles full of clothes, blasting music. Overall your poem "I am from" was amazing. Betsy,
I really enjoyed reading your poem, I could really relate. My favorite part of your poem was your first stanza- piles full of clothes, blasting music. Overall your poem “I am from” was amazing.

]]> By: Zainub http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-45 Zainub Thu, 01 May 2008 14:28:08 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-45 Good job Betsy!!! Your poem was amazing!!!! I loved the rhyming. Good job Betsy!!! Your poem was amazing!!!! I loved the rhyming.

]]> By: Katie A http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-42 Katie A Thu, 01 May 2008 14:24:44 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-42 Great poem Betsy! It's true as well! I liked how some of the lines rhymed, but not all do. I love how well you described everything! Great poem Betsy! It’s true as well! I liked how some of the lines rhymed, but not all do. I love how well you described everything!

]]> By: Laurel http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/comment-page-1/#comment-37 Laurel Fri, 25 Apr 2008 13:19:08 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-3/#comment-37 I really like the poem you wrote about where you are "from". One of my favorite quotes from the poem is from your description of your room: “I am from music blasting from speakers, From piles of shirts, shorts, socks, and sneakers From every wall, you see a picture And laughs and memories are within these mixtures” I can relate to the imagery here, because my room is somewhat similar. I like the way you turned things so regular and simple into meaningful and descriptive poetry! I really like the poem you wrote about where you are “from”. One of my favorite quotes from the poem is from your description of your room:

“I am from music blasting from speakers,
From piles of shirts, shorts, socks, and sneakers
From every wall, you see a picture
And laughs and memories are within these mixtures”

I can relate to the imagery here, because my room is somewhat similar. I like the way you turned things so regular and simple into meaningful and descriptive poetry!

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