Comments on: I Am From http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/ Wed, 10 Sep 2008 11:33:40 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Rhonda Rodriguez http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/comment-page-1/#comment-116 Rhonda Rodriguez Fri, 16 May 2008 16:40:36 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/#comment-116 your poem is so amazing I really like how creative you are it is totally awesome. anyway I like the verse you used " I am from beating drums From trails of tears From not wasting a thing And becoming one with the Earth" because that is something i can totally connect to your poem is so amazing I really like how creative you are it is totally awesome. anyway I like the verse you used
” I am from beating drums From trails of tears From not wasting a thing And becoming one with the Earth” because that is something i can totally connect to

]]> By: msresourcenetwork http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/comment-page-1/#comment-41 msresourcenetwork Thu, 01 May 2008 14:18:35 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/#comment-41 Katie, Thank you for letting us know about the typo. That was my error! I have made the change. Good work, Mrs. D Katie,

Thank you for letting us know about the typo. That was my error! I have made the change.

Good work,
Mrs. D

]]> By: Katie A http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/comment-page-1/#comment-40 Katie A Thu, 01 May 2008 14:15:45 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/#comment-40 Thank you for reading my poem! There is a typo in the second stanza. Instead of "swearing colors" it should be "Swirling colors." Thank you for reading my poem! There is a typo in the second stanza. Instead of “swearing colors” it should be “Swirling colors.”

]]> By: Grant http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/comment-page-1/#comment-38 Grant Mon, 28 Apr 2008 02:57:46 +0000 http://msresourcenetwork.edublogs.org/2008/04/18/i-am-from-4/#comment-38 Hey Katie, I actually really liked your poem! There was so much hidden meaning about where you are truly from. For instance, putting quotations around "free" in your America stanza really showed how you felt about where our country has been... and where it is going.... Your heritage stanza was also really interesting. Not many people here in Georgia are descended from Native Americans, but you could have focused on some other aspects of your heritage. I know you're not fully Native American! Overall, though, I thought it was really good and displayed your thoughts very nicely! Keep up the great work! Hey Katie, I actually really liked your poem! There was so much hidden meaning about where you are truly from. For instance, putting quotations around “free” in your America stanza really showed how you felt about where our country has been… and where it is going…. Your heritage stanza was also really interesting. Not many people here in Georgia are descended from Native Americans, but you could have focused on some other aspects of your heritage. I know you’re not fully Native American! Overall, though, I thought it was really good and displayed your thoughts very nicely! Keep up the great work!

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